A cool story with interesting ideas and told at a good pace. Interesting that the main protagonists are actually the bad guys. I think it works....
Done mine! I'm just sitting on it and waiting for the inevitable "oh god I need to change all of it". Yes this time I can't be bothered with the...
More homework! http://www.lustria-online.com/threads/january-february-2016-short-story-contest-voting-thread.17359/page-4#post-149879
This is a superb story but I disagree about anti-hero - he's a clear villain who you want to fail.
I was bloody terrified. [SPOILER]
I'm glad to see that voting ends in march - good to know scalanex's foul experiments have finally cracked time travel. If I'd known this'd be the...
I can't remember which discussion it was but I saw the word "hardboiled" somewhere on here and the words just flowed out of me ;) Some may say...
It was just another shift at the temple until some old kroxigor stumbled in. Damn brute didn’t even know how to talk, just kept pointing his mace...
I like the phrase "bit of a merger"
thrilling. it feels like a prologue....hint hint
I've been enjoying the story a lot and impressed at its incredible pace. The humour works really well! It's very pratchett, which of course I love...
No, the dioramas are fantastic and should definitely enter. The next step is for bowser to make a stop motion.
The Dark Knight surveyed the dank alley from his rooftop vantage, his midnight cape clutched across his cowl. A single phosphorous light flickered...
oh my g-o-s-h. You have bowser and bob models. that's literally the coolest thing I've ever seen. And I NEVER exaggerate.
I'm attempting to bring my hands and eyes into some horrendously crude semblance of coordination. Only problem is I have no idea how to get pencil...
Dare I enquire whether there's an appetite for more than 4 per year?? Or whether there might be interest perhaps in a non-voting comp, maybe more...
Great intro! Nice to have a serious contingent of female characters at last. The only improvement I can recommend is lines between paragraphs :D
I think the explanation has left me more confused. I love it!!
tbh the thing I've been most looking forward to is finding out what bob's insane author-guess mumbo jumbo was all about....so....still waiting....
here here! that would literally be the best thing I've ever heard of