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Discussion Everything which provokes an opinion about my fluff. (Bob's Idea.)

Discussion in 'Fluff and Stories' started by Kcibrihp-Esurc, May 7, 2015.

  1. Scalenex
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    I cannot overemphasize agreeing with Bob on this one.

    If you want to tell episodic stories with a loose tie-in the current system is okay but I'm finding it near impossible to keep track of your overarching narrative.
     
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  2. RoseThorn
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    So do my pieces count for this thread, or do I need my own?
     
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  3. Kcibrihp-Esurc
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  4. RoseThorn
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    Here's an opinion. Stop 'fluffing' (Get it??) around and we can get on with you know what
     
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  5. RoseThorn
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    Re-reading that pun makes me cringe.
    I reckon that Iasad should reappear soon, he kinda vanished. Otherwise just that we need to keep going. Currently there are 2? 3? Big bads and I think another one coming...?
    Just ja, get working, to both of us
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    MWAHAHAHAHAA IT IS MINE NOW!!!
     
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  6. Kcibrihp-Esurc
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  7. RoseThorn
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    Character Origins: Jekal was fairly small, but I guess that makes sense.
    You should do a Character Origins for one of the Antagonists
     
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  8. Paradoxical Pacifism
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    In general, i like the stories a lot. They are, for the most part, fast paced and fun to read. I also like the titling too. Most people probably don't care about titling stories/chapters much at all, but imo, titles can be used to place emphasis on the theme and tone among many other things.

    I would like it if each story started out slower and partially explained the events of its predecessor or predecessors.
    Mostly to set the tone, but also to quickly remind the reader. This doesn't need to be done all the time, though.

    Also, do you not know the terror of no one commenting on your work? :(
     

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