It's just such a beautiful sentence. Another great sentence. But...pretty sure Bob comes before me. And I doubt he'll have ANY trouble picking...
Massive congrats! I'd just like to say that while the winning story was not among my favourites (the conflict needs to be dramatised, not...
Has Scalanex taught you nothing? Never toy with unnatural forces you cannot comprehend! The mad scientist ALWAYS regrets the resurrection *cackles...
Gosh, things have changed drastically...and yet, they haven't changed at all. Good work to all voters on maintaining the tie - just a couple more...
Wait... the pirate economy is the thing you choose to call out GW for being unrealistic??
I'm struggling to work out if this is literally just bloodbowl fanfic or if you're aware of real mayan sports......
You may be onto something here. You may even have hit upon the crux, the very nub, as it were, of the endeavour. Chapter 2 The Duke of Lesser...
Actually I love the new characters! It builds a richer tapestry that makes the main plot all the more satisfying. It's all about delaying of...
Ahhh....love it. So exciting.
Ahaha. I hope that was you @pendrake. EXCELLENT choices.
I've read it...and look forward to reading future instalments! If you want specific feedback...well I'd say that so far it's mostly setup and...
Give us the situation and we can advise on specifics. In general this is excellent advice. The key drama of the story should be the same thing...
You calling me mad? I'm not mad! *giggles and covers self in skaven blood* I was referring to things like the Lay of Turin or Beren or some such....
Currently this isn't really a story, it's a creation myth. I like it! For me, the next step would be to start a story: have actual named...
Who said I have entered? I just want the prize.... Or do I?
Sudden bout of competitiveness, eh bob? Why can't we just say everyone's a winner? *puts a flower in the barrel of a blowpipe* Also that would...
Yeah... Maybe we should have a stickied thread titled "miscellaneous" where folks can go to chat about trivial or unrelated stuff. I posted a...
John Cage's "4'33" is commonly misinterpreted as four and half minutes of silence, but this is not what the composer intended. Rather, it was...
Great story. Gripping.
Yuuuuuuuuuuup. Praise be to Avatarzi!