Nice. The ending is definitely much more engaging. I still think it's a bit deus ex machina when the slann just happens to have a grub that gives...
And I thought *I* was a fan of OP rules! Can't believe GW never thought of allowing you to teleport in an additional 2500pt army :D Stunning :D
BEAUTIFUL!! This is the first romantic thing I've seen in a long time that hasn't made me want to pull my own eyes out/mutter cynically.
I actually LOVE that idea.
*I* have misgivings about some of it. :)
If there's one horseman/nazgul then the number 4 should appear somewhere - maybe on the glyph? But if you're going to the trouble of making a cool...
Finding out that Daughter of Bob (13) is a reader has reawakened my not-very-dormant desire to write for that age group. There is in fact a Sister...
Indeed. I believe you refer to: Lit Crit Theory 1. Short stories, like all stories, need goals, urgency, and stakes. (I'll just wait for Bob to...
If I could put in a humble request to Avatarzi, Old One of avatar creation (brother of Artzifartzi I assume), I think it's probably time to get me...
Woah. You disagree with me? But you're just "an improving writer" whereas I am "an authority on writing"! Seriously, you should disagree with me...
Feel free to duplicate away. I did consider posting it as it's own thread, just because it's so long, but that felt too grandiose.
Screw it, I'll do them now, while the iron is tepid. Far be it for me to attempt any usurping of unnamed forumite's role as class clown village...
Oh great, you've ensured he won't shut up about it now. :) It's all about the Bob meta-game and reverse psycholobob Wow. That's epic. I am now...
I couldn't disagree more with this comment (and Scalanex's critique) - I agree with bob. You can NEVER have too much subtlety or ambiguity. I...
If you said those were coatl feathers it would be a valid (and very offensive) entry!
Dammit I was trying to figure out who wrote what but now I'm trying to figure out the arcane significance of these mad runes.
Thanks. I never got over 7th edition. *sighs wistfully*
epic thanks :)
Thank you and what an honour! I would humbly request that if you're going to put "behold" in front of the title, it might work better if there's a...
Inspired by Bob's prodigious* output, I have written a story, and tried to make it longer than I'm used to. Don't worry, it's still comparatively...